In this exercise, which will work exactly like your previous elevator pitch exercise, you'll record your elevator pitch and post it here. Here's what you should include in the post:
1) The pitch. Same as last time, 1-minute long. No Web cams. No sitting. Be dynamic! Upload the video to YouTube (as you do with all of your videos) and post the link.
URL: https://youtu.be/PvvYMn7Oy-o
URL: https://youtu.be/PvvYMn7Oy-o
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. Describe what stood out to you as important, what feedback surprised you the most, what feedback you think was outright wrong or silly or amazing and inciteful.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I can't speak about my idea in one minute! I can't speak that fast without mumbling, I need to work on my 3-minute original speech to crumble it in a delicate, yet sophisticated way. I do not need to go so fast and I need to calm down.
Hey Sebastian! The one minute constrain has to be the hardest part of this assignment. How can you thoroughly explain your product and why it's needed it in one minute? It takes a lot of practice to get it just right, so don't worry and just keep improving bit by bit. That being said I do see improvement from your first elevator pitch! Their is a more clear problem and solution while also explaining what makes your product unique to those on the market. One things I would change is scenery. I loved how your first one was outdoors as that goes with your theme and aesthetic. Doing this in a partially dark room and pacing in a small space was distracting me from your words. Also where the clothes your trying to sell! If you have something to show then do it! Overall good improvement!
ReplyDeleteWhat helped me with my elevator pitch was to write bullet points. I was able to filter down what was really important. I tend to be long winded so the 1 minute time constraint was difficult for me. In the business world it’s important though. You really do only have about 1 minute to catch someone’s interest. You continue to grow and this video was more direct and clearer than your 1st. You’ll gain confidence the more you do this. Remember to look someone in the eye, or in this case in the camera. It’s an easy way to fake that you are confident.
ReplyDeleteGreat speech! I thought you did a great job and had a lot of energy in your speech. You seemed to practice a lot as your speech was very well organized and delivered well. The overall content was very informative and gave good details. Your speech has definitely improved since the first time we did a speech. The only thing that wasn't too good was the video quality.
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