Hey Sebastian! First I am just confused as to what is your main product, as all but one of your previous posts were about the more effective nicotine patches. The point of these assignments is to build off each other, till we form a complete business or product idea. That being said, I think your pitch was unique! Being outside and having movement made it more enjoyable to watch. I think that was also a disadvantage for you as you seemed lost and didn't know what to say. I didn't fully understand the problem, like you said it was uncomfortable, but how is it uncomfortable? Then the product was different pieces, not just a hammock. I think something you could do next time to do a speed up clip of you walking around smokers and have a dialogue going on explaining the harms of smoking and how you plan to solve it.
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Have you decided to change your product from the patch to handcrafted items? If so I liked your hook. I was able to envision myself in the hammock, and yes, sometimes they are uncomfortable. I liked how you reinforced that these items are unique. I do believe one reason people who purchase handcrafted items are to stand out from basic items are you referred to them as. It was great to add that another benefit is that they are supporting a community. Since I am on a budget I am not a customer that would seek to purchase hand crafted items. So you lost me a bit when you continued talking about how they are unique. Remember an elevator pitch might be to an investor who wouldn't purchase the product. So focus on having someone who might not be a customer of your product be able to identify with those that are.
Hey Sebastian! First I am just confused as to what is your main product, as all but one of your previous posts were about the more effective nicotine patches. The point of these assignments is to build off each other, till we form a complete business or product idea. That being said, I think your pitch was unique! Being outside and having movement made it more enjoyable to watch. I think that was also a disadvantage for you as you seemed lost and didn't know what to say. I didn't fully understand the problem, like you said it was uncomfortable, but how is it uncomfortable? Then the product was different pieces, not just a hammock. I think something you could do next time to do a speed up clip of you walking around smokers and have a dialogue going on explaining the harms of smoking and how you plan to solve it.
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Have you decided to change your product from the patch to handcrafted items? If so I liked your hook. I was able to envision myself in the hammock, and yes, sometimes they are uncomfortable. I liked how you reinforced that these items are unique. I do believe one reason people who purchase handcrafted items are to stand out from basic items are you referred to them as. It was great to add that another benefit is that they are supporting a community. Since I am on a budget I am not a customer that would seek to purchase hand crafted items. So you lost me a bit when you continued talking about how they are unique. Remember an elevator pitch might be to an investor who wouldn't purchase the product. So focus on having someone who might not be a customer of your product be able to identify with those that are.